Valerie Adams

This week our class have been doing some writing about a NZ Olympian. I was learning to Paragraph and my Success Criteria is to stick to one topic, adding 2-3 supporting details and my last sentence is a concluding sentence. I was writing about Valerie Adams, she is a amazing shot putter. I found it a bit challenging sticking to one topic because sometimes I get mixed up on what I'm writing about. I found it very enjoyable writing about Valerie Adams and what she did in the Olympics. I will use more of my own words in my writing next time. Here is my writing!