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Hello I am Ataliyah from Waitohu School in Otaki. I liked the way you put a cool background of the water on your blog. Your picture reminds me of the first time I saw a sea lion. Maybe next add more detail of the sea lions like what they do.
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Dear Sophia,
ReplyDeleteI like how you put such a cute photo of a sea lion!
Maybe next time you could write more??
Ma te wa
Seddon.
Hello I am Ataliyah from Waitohu School in Otaki.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put a cool background of the water on your
blog.
Your picture reminds me of the first time I saw a sea lion.
Maybe next add more detail of the sea lions like what they do.